Family Matters Community Tutoring

Presents the web version of

 

Taking Flight:

Personal Narratives and Other Literary Writings of Growth by Some of Our Students in Grades 1–12

Printed in Full—with Authors’ Names, Titles, Texts, and Tutors’ Names—on the Following Fifteen Pages

 

          

 

                                    23 April 2005 (Shakespeare’s Birthday)

 

 

 

 

Devon Lovell, Community Tutoring Director

Edwin Rodriguez, Coordinator Community Tutoring

Dr. George Seidenbecker, Literary Magazine Editor

Family Matters

7731 N. Marshfield Avenue

Chicago, Illinois 60626

http://www.familymatterschicago.org

 

 

 

 

 

Table of Contents

 

 

 

 

 

Author

Genre

Title

Approx. Page

 

 

 

 

Edwin Rodriguez

Photograph

Goshawk

1

Jamal Wilson

Personal Narrative

Reunion in Texas

2

José Espinoza

Personal Narrative

Soccer on Sunday

4

Erick Ramirez

Personal Narrative

The Snowball Fight

4

Nataly Ramirez

Character Sketch

The Person I Most Admire

5

Pablo Ramirez

Personal Reaction

The Chicago Auto Show

5

Vanessa Ramirez

Personal Reaction

Why My Mom Is Very Special

6

Germain Morales

Travelogue

Guatemala

6

Migdolena Salgado

Personal Narrative

Another Long Trip

7

Mariana Bastida

Personal Reaction

My Favorite Sport

8

Eduardo Ramirez

Personal Narrative

The Chicago Auto Show

8

Gabriel Hernandez

Process Essay

The Chess Tournament

9

Christian Martinez

Personal Narrative

My Visit to Warren Park

9

Thomas Sanders

Personal Narrative

Why?

10

Ethan Cabrera

Personal Narrative

The Cockroach

10

Jica’h Salami

Fantasy

Boogey-Monster

11

Nancy Aguilar

Personal Narrative

How I Got Hollie

11

Kenia Pablo

Personal Narrative

Spring Vacation

12

Vantner Cruz

Travelogue

A Trip to Mexico

12

Tahir Meeks

Reminiscence

The Guardian Angel

13

Yadira Ramirez

Reminiscence (text)

Summer in April

14

Yadira Ramirez

Line Drawing (illustration)

Summer in April

14

George Seidenbecker

Editorial Comment

Production Note

15

Further Reading

Web Address

An Earlier Taking Flight

15

Family Matters

Web Address

Overview

15

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

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Jamal Wilson

Ninth Grade Author

Personal Narrative

Taking Flight page 2 of 15

Mathias Muschal Tutor

 

Reunion in Texas

I awoke at about 6:00AM that morning, the bright sun hit me in the face, I smelled sausages sizzling on the skillet. I walked down the stairs to come and find out what was smelling so good. My aunt was making eggs, grits, bacon, biscuits, and sausages. My mouth was watering until I couldn’t hold my lip up. I went and washed up and put on my clothes. Rushing to the table, I nearly fell down. I sat there and ate while watching the 6:00AM news. When I finished, I resumed packing my bag from last night. My uncle had just started to wake up and he ate and then we stared to finished packing the truck. At about 1:00PM we were finished. Exhausted, we drove to the store to get us some drinks. We came back and then we said goodbye to my aunt and then we were off.

My uncle hopped onto the driver’s side, and my uncle’s friend got onto the passenger side. I was forced to get into the middle where there was barely enough room to stretch my legs out. We stared off by making sure the truck was fully loaded with gas, and from there we set off on I–55. For most of the beginning of the ride it was boring because we only saw cattle and cornfields. As we approached mid‑state Illinois, we had to stop and fill up for gas and get something to eat. Now it was about 7:00PM. We were now approaching the city of St. Louis. I was surprised to see the famous Gateway Arch. At about 8:00PM, the sun was now setting, and it was almost completely dark like we were on some back roads or something.

Next thing I know there was my uncle falling asleep at the wheel. My uncle’s friend exclaimed, “Are you trying to get us killed, fool?” My uncle woke up quickly, not realizing he just fell asleep. We pulled over at the next rest stop, and now my uncle’s friend took over the driving. Around 11:00PM we reached Memphis, TN, and my uncle said we can exit. He and his friend spend the night at my cousin’s house. They were expecting us anyway. We arrived and spent time together. When morning came around, we were now back off on the road. The gas tank was almost empty, so we pulled over at the next gas station before we got back on the interstate.

While we were out on the road, I was praying that we would find a good radio station while we where on the road. Only thing I found was blues and country. Saying to myself I mumbled, “I should’ve brought my walkman.” At 4:00PM we approached Little Rock, AR. Finally, some good rap/R&B radio stations came in.

We stopped at a gas station, and suddenly it began pouring down with rain. As we got back to the truck from getting something to eat, the window was left wide open, and since it just got through raining there was a gigantic swarm of mosquitoes that got into the car. Somehow we forgot to put up the window. My uncle was ecstatic. He was going through a fit saying words that I think no one would approve of.

We eventually got the mosquitoes out by turning the air conditioner on full blast, and they had died out. Relieved, we began driving again, and soon we approached a big sign that said, “WELCOME TO TEXAS.” After a twenty‑mile drive, we finally made it to Texas: I was very excited. From here my auntie’s house was only about ten miles away. Soon we arrived with hugs and kisses from all of my cousins and other family members. I kept hearing, “Oh I’m so glad to see you!” like we’ve fell off the earth or something. After we got settled in and unpacked our clothes, we then ate and sat around watching movies and doing all sorts of fun stuff. At about midnight we were tired so we went to bed. That next morning we told my aunt that we would take the car and go visit our other cousins in Houston, witch would be about a six to seven hour drive depending on the traffic. After we came back from Houston to New Boston, we just hung out with the family for another week or so and we said our goodbyes and we were headed back on home.

Since spending time in Texas, I learned a lot about the people in the South and how they are so hospitable. I left with a whole new meaning of how we all come from different areas, but we have a special connection between all of the people not just in the U.S. but also everywhere in the world. Although the trip down to Texas was rough at the time, I got to spend time with my family to make up for it.

 

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José Espinoza

Fifth Grade Author

Personal Narrative

Taking Flight page 4 of 15

George Seidenbecker Tutor

 

Soccer on Sunday

At 11: 50AM on Sunday in summer, mom, dad, and I got into our car for a trip of three miles to my soccer game on Wilson Avenue in Chicago. In the back seat I was putting on my shinguards and my soccer shoes.

When we got to the park, my team practiced a little. The team of fifteen guys kicked the ball around ten minutes until the soccer game started.

My team and the other team were tied 0-0 the first half. After four minutes, my goalie kicked the ball to me, then I passed to my friend, then he passed back to me, and I scored.

There were thirty minutes left. The other team scored to tie at one, but then there were ten minutes left, and my team scored again. It was the final score.

My team won 2-1. We were really happy, and my mom and dad and our coaches were saying to the whole team congratulations.

 

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Erick Ramirez

Fifth Grade Author

Personal Narrative

Taking Flight page 4 of 15

Marilyn Scavuzzo Tutor

 

The Snowball Fight

WAMO! My face so cold, my gloves so wet. His three men down and one to go. My men were getting tired. But we kept throwing snowballs. My uncle and my three sisters were all against my team.

My friends and I broke my uncle’s fort by putting stones in the snowballs. He wondered how our snowballs were so powerful. When we threw one, he grabbed the snowball. He looked at what was in it, and he saw the stone. When my friends saw that, they took off. Now my sister and I were the only ones on my team.

We left our fort so my uncle wouldn’t get me. My uncle started to chase me. I went under the stairs so he wouldn’t get me. I knew one more hit and we would win. I threw the last snowball. I was going to hit him, but my uncle moved out of the way. I threw a snowball one more time, but it missed him. He threw a snowball at me. I crunched down to get a snowball, but on my way down his snowball hit me.

My uncle won. But we both got the prize–a cup of hot chocolate.

 

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Nataly Ramirez

Ninth Grade Author

Character Sketch

Taking Flight page 5 of 15

Kathy Spears Tutor

 

The Person I Most Admire

The person that I admire is my mother because she has been there for me and my family. She came from Pueblo, Mexico. Her father still lives in Mexico. My mother never really knew her mother. She has not been in school since eighth grade.

My mother went to Mexico City to work, and she found a store that she worked in until she went back to her home town. Then she got married. She came to Chicago and has been here for twelve years. I think she also is brave because she takes care of nine kids, and she also is a great mother because she shows us the rules of life.

I also know when my mother is happy and when she is sad.

 

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Pablo Ramirez

Tenth Grade Author

Personal Reaction

Taking Flight page 5 of 15

Phillip Heyrman Tutor

 

The Chicago Auto Show

Every year the Nation’s largest auto show comes to the McCormick Place. The Chicago Auto Show covers an incredible 1.2 million square feet. The year 2005 marked the first time I attended the auto show. Everything was exciting from the trip there to the flashy cars.

It was a cold afternoon when my aunt picked up my brother and I at our house. After a fast ride down Lake Shore Drive, she dropped us off at Roosevelt Road, roughly a mile away from McCormick Place. My brother and I began walking the long, chilly sidewalk to the show. As we wandered the streets of downtown, we began to worry that we might be lost. Our fears went away as soon as we saw people with blue bags with cars on them walking around us. Soon after, we arrived at the main entrance to the show.

We bought our tickets for $15 and went in to the show. We passed the Dodge and Chrysler exhibits and headed into the Hummer area. We got into the tall Hummer H2 SUT and took pictures behind the wheel. We also went to the back and saw the TVs attached to the front seats. As we left the Hummer area, we saw some customized cars. They had some amazing rims, wild spoilers, and fascinating paint jobs.

Our next destination, the Ford area, was the main reason that we wanted to come to the show. We were excited to come to this area because it contained the Shelby GR-1. It has 605 Hp and a 6AL engine. The design is very flashy and smooth. The car comes with silver body paint and with butterfly doors. The car was roped off so we couldn’t get a close inspection. After looking at this car, we checked out the SYNus. This car looked like an armored truck with a TV on the back. The design made the vehicle look strong, and I wouldn’t mind driving one myself.

Our final destination of the day was the Jeep section. We saw a dirt track with obstacles such as rocks, water, and trees. We waited a long two and a half hours in line to get in the car and experience how it is to go through off-road terrain. My favorite part of this ride was when we got on the steep mountain where we where pulled back towards our seats.

As night came people started leavin’, and we were also on our way home. Even though we had problems getting out, we were able to find our way. As we exited, I was left with the great memories of a Saturday well spent.

 

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Vanessa Ramirez

Seventh Grade Author

Personal Reaction

Taking Flight page 6 of 15

Alica Rodriguez Tutor

 

Why My Mom Is Very Special

My name is Vanessa Ramirez, and I’m going to write about the person I really love, my mom. My mother has been there for me and my eight brothers and sisters when my father left us a year ago. My mother decided that she would stay and work so we could have a nice life with an education that would help us become a great doctor or teacher. I’m very proud that she is my mother because she has worked very hard to help us become better people and successful in the world.

She is very caring because when one of us has a cold she makes sure that we have all the things we need to get better. She does so many things for us because she loves us very much. When I grow up, I want to be like my mother and make her very proud so she can see that all her hard work has paid off. Her hard work may make me the person that I’m going to be.

She is strong in that she didn’t give up and let it affect her that my father’s family has not helped her but instead criticized her and said mean things to her. She put all the things aside, and she never looked back at the things she says or do.

Even though her life was very hard because she was very poor and had to work since she was very little, she is gentle and sweet to us. I don’t know how my mother does it, but she has gotten us to where we are now with a better education and place to sleep.

 

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Germain Morales

Seventh Grade Author

Travelogue

Taking Flight page 6 of 15

 Angelica Bugarin Tutor

 

Guatemala

Guatemala is located by the southern part of Mexico near El Salvador, Belize, and Honduras. One day I will like to go to Honduras because the weather is nice and warm and I can do a lot of outside activities. I also have family there from my dad’s side that I never met, and, when I go with my family from Chicago, I’ll get to meet them.

There’s a lot of interesting things for me to do like during the summer the carnival goes there and there is lots of different kinds of food and games too. I have uncles that teach driving, so I hope that one of my uncles will teach me how to drive around the city. I hope that I might climb mountains and have ponies while I’m there.

I will save money, so I can bring gifts back home to Chicago for friends and family.

 

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Migdolena Salgado

Eighth Grade Author

Personal Narrative

Taking Flight page 7 of 15

Laurel Lawson Tutor

 

Another Long Trip

Our vacation can be exciting, frustrating, and confusing. At least once a year my mother and I go to Mexico to visit the family. We spend hours and hours packing. Next we take everything out. We pack mostly the same clothes again after my mom and I argue over what to take. Then we get cranky because we have to pack so much: brushes, clothes, soap, shoes, camera, and gifts. Lots and lots of gifts. My mom says in Spanish, “Stop packing too much stuff.” Then she starts saying it in another language that I don’t even understand. I just know that she is mad because she starts yelling. So I leave her alone.

My mom and I get worried about missing the plane. We stand for hours in line waiting to be called. People are very frustrated in line. I am one of them! When we get into the plane, I usually take the window seat. If I get dizzy, I change seats with my mother. Oh, no, the movie is coming. I have already seen it. Now it’s time to take my nap instead of watching it. I wake up when the flight attendant gives us a tray of dried eggs. Not my favorite thing to eat.

I know my relatives are there before I see them because I hear screaming. I see huge signs that say, “Bienvenidos a Mexico Migdolena y Irma.” I felt so embarrassed. My “Auntie Man” is there. She looks like she just finished cooking because she has on an apron. “Migdolena!” she yells out so everybody can hear. Cousin Carlos says, “Great, you’re here. Let’s go home.” He is two years older than me. Off we go with my aunt, my cousin, and lots of suitcases.

When I get there, I get bored and want to come back home. I get homesick. I miss people like my dad and my friends. I know when I get homesick because I talk in my sleep. My cousin said I talked half in Spanish and half English. After a month I’m looking forward to going home to spend time with my friends. Now we wait until next year to go back again.

 

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Mariana Bastida

Third Grade Author

Personal Reaction

Taking Flight page 8 of 15

Dan Dooley Tutor

 

My Favorite Sport

I love soccer because you get to run around and kick the ball. My whole family plays soccer together. We have to wear uniforms so everyone knows which team we are on. We play in fields or in the park. Mostly on grass because we can get hurt if we do not play on grass.

It’s very good exercise. It’s also a lot of fun when you exercise. When we want, we can have time out and drink water. Then we are not thirsty any more.

There has to be an even number of players on each team. The team can have boys, girls, and adults. You win by kicking the ball into the goal. The wining team has the best players.

I think Ill play a lot of soccer this summer.

 

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Eduardo Ramirez

Seventh Grade Author

Personal Narrative

Taking Flight page 8 of 15

Sam Lovering Tutor

 

The Chicago Auto Show

My brother and I had been talking about going to the Chicago Auto Show for days. We had always told our parents we wanted to go and they say “Yes,” but we never went. This time it was different. It was a Saturday, and there were no excuses that we couldn’t go. I always wanted to go to the car show to see all of the new cars. I went with my older brother, Pablo.

Our aunt had taken us to the car show at about ten o’clock. She had left us several blocks always from the auto show. It had taken us about thirty minutes just to get there. When we finally got there, there were lines of people waiting to get tickets to get in.

I couldn’t wait to see all of the cars I have seen on TV. They’re big cars like the Hummers and some cars that I never heard of. One of my favorite cars that I never saw was different. Its door opened up instead of out. It had rims, the ones that spin. Another car that I like was the Ford GT-1. It was different because the paint looked as if it were made of mirrors. One of the things we did was go on a Jeep ride. They let us ride a Jeep. We had gone to eat. I ate pizza and a soda. After that we went to see some other cars, cars like BMWs, Mercedes Benz, and Porsche. We looked at a lot of pictures.

We stayed there until the car show ended at ten. We had been walking for hours. We had tried to find the way to the place we had entered and get out. We went up and down several floors. We asked different people; they all pointed us different ways. By the time we found the right way, it was ten-thirty. We forget to tell our dad where to meet us. By the time he came, it was eleven‑thirty.

We went home, and I fell asleep.

 

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Gabriel Hernandez

Fourth Grade Author

Process Essay

Taking Flight page 9 of 15

Linda Madigan Tutor

 

The Chess Tournament

I think it’s hard to win the tournament trophy. I need to rake off the opponent’s pieces to win. The King is a good piece. The Queen is a very important piece. The Knight and Bishop are good to protect. A Pawn is a good piece to protect a bishop. A Rook is a very good piece because it can go up, back, and to the sides. I play chess all the time: at home, in my programs, and at school.

 

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Christian Martinez

Ninth Grade Author

Personal Narrative

Taking Flight page 9 of 15

Eric Holeman Tutor

 

My Visit to Warren Park

I decided that it was time to show my skills to the people at Warren Park. When I arrived there, I saw many people playing basketball. I asked them if I could play with them. So, I started playing. It was my first time touching the ball during the game.

I felt something bad was going to happen to the person guarding me. I tricked him right, then left, I bounced the ball off his head, then I shot it from the three-pointer-line and it went in.

As I saw Donovan’s face, he seemed so embarrassed about what just happened. He seemed to be more confident than before. I could tell that he wanted to show up against me.

As I shot and missed, Donovan grabbed the rebound. He started to take shots. He ran out to the three-pointer-range and shot. The ball was flowing in the air, then hit the rim, it hit the top of the backboard, spun on top of the backboard for two seconds, then hit the rim again, and the ball fell through the net. I didn’t know what was happening; all I knew was that he was up by 5 points. We were playing up to 21 points. It seemed that it was going to be a long day.

When he grabbed the rebound, he took it out, then tried to drive in with a layup, but I blocked his shot. He grabbed the rebound and faked a shot, then ran, and took a fadeaway shot. The shot was in.

I watched how the ball went through the rim. I decided that was enough. Later, Donovan took a three-pointer, but he missed. I got the rebound and took an inside shot. It went in. I kept shooting, but this time from the three-pointer. All the shots were in: all you could hear was the net twisting.

Donovan also didn’t give up and kept going. We were very tired; we both needed two points to win each. The score was tied 19 to 19. I had possession; I decided not to risk a three pointer shot. I drove in hard and scored. Donovan was very mad. I wanted to end it with a spectacular play. Then I shouted aloud, “Game over.” I checked the ball from the out-of-bounds side. I faked him left, then I went right, I sped up, and then I ended the game with a reverse, going under the rim, jumping in the air, putting the ball over my right shoulder, hitting the backboard, and going in.

Shrek! That was the sound when the ball went through the net. Then the ball bounced three times on the floor and started to roll toward me. I took off my headband and threw in front of Donovan’s face, shaking my head saying “No!”

Then I picked up the ball and left.

 

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Thomas Sanders

Eighth Grade Author

Personal Narrative

Taking Flight page 10 of 15

Robert Kriss Tutor

 

Why?

It was a day after school in the park getting ready for my softball game. The fifth and sixth graders had their game first. I was watching the game with some of my buddies. Because the fifth and sixth graders lost the game, they started a fight with the other team. We tried to break it up. But, because they had a fight, the seventh and eighth graders couldn’t have a basketball game at home later in the year.

We asked our coach to talk to the principal for our team about having home games. But the principal said “No" to our coach. Then the coach took it into his own hands and asked a teacher to write a letter to the Board of Education.

Later, after we finished one of our basketball games at another school, our principal met us as we came off the bus. She said, “Guess what guys?”

We said, “Yes?”

She said, “You all can have a home game.”

We cheered and said, “Thanks.”

Our experience was if you are in a group that did something wrong, you can get penalized for it even though you didn’t have anything to do with it. So the way I feel is don’t hang out with a bad group.

 

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Ethan Cabrera

First Grade Author

Personal Narrative

Taking Flight page 10 of 15

Devon Lovell Tutor

 

The Cockroach

I woke up at 5:00 and I had my eyes a little closed and I opened the refrigerator and I got the milk. I got the cereal from the pantry. I got the spoon from the kitchen. Then I saw the cockroach close to the

refrigerator.

He looked black and strong with, I think, four legs. I got the stool, and then I squished it. I took it off of it, and I got the bug spray. I put a lot of bug spray on him, and he was dead. I wanted to kill him with a knife. I was going to squish him with my foot, but then he would be squished on me and maybe climb up me, and I would have to throw him off my shoulder. If he was still alive, I would tell my mom and my dad to kill him.

And I would fight him with my dad. I would use a lot of bug spray.

I went to my room, and I didnt eat breakfast. And I wanted to move out of the house. I didnt want to eat lunch or dinner. For three days I didnt want to eat. But my mom cheered me up, and then I wanted to eat cereal and

lunch and dinner again.

 

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Jicah Salami

First Grade Author

Fantasy

Taking Flight page 11 of 15

Lauren Przyborowski Tutor

 

Boogey-Monster

One day there was a boogey-monster. He had four legs, two heads, and twenty arms. His

arms were stretchable. He only came out in the dark. Every time it was dark he would open something that wasnt his. When he did that, the people thought he was a human being. He tricked them and acted like he only wanted to take stuff from them, but instead he killed them. Then he would disappear into the night. He comes back the next night and kills people one by one.